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worldz apart by =InMyDisk3yez:iconInMyDisk3yez:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Transgressive > Open


i can see your face in the sky
but i'll alwayz question why
why you would do that to me
az i take the long road home
to a home that izn't mine
i can't stop thinking about you
my broken heart explodez with many armz
reaching out to pull you back to me
i'm not going to loze you that eazily
i'm not letting you go without a fight
having you in my life, to me, pheelz right
my heart aches to talk to you
we both know what we've been thru
giant speed bumps and flooded dips
ups and downz, smilez and frownz
but i know you can't be without me
rozez are red, the sky iz blue
you know i can't live without you
©2008-2009 =InMyDisk3yez
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written today, for :iconmystiphied:.

disclaimer: if you don't like my spelling, then, pleaze, don't comment on it. thank you.

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~CaptainQuirk Mar 16, 2008, 5:52:21 PM
I can hear the longing in the speaker's voice.

:hug:

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:star:Rules are like paperclips: meant to keep things together, fun to bend, and easily twisted out of shape.
:star:There is no problem the human mind cannot solve or create.
:star:Step One is learning the ropes. Step Two is chewing through them.
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Mood: Sadness ~mystiphied Mar 16, 2008, 8:01:53 PM
i hear you.

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And for a time, I allowed my mind to wander in a bottomless abyss...
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~randomcutie Mar 16, 2008, 8:12:03 PM
Your pain and want just radiates from the poem... although I doubt that's very helpful, I'm sorry... the poem is really good, though... :hug:

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People change so that you can learn to let go, things go wrong so that you can appriciate them when they're right, and sometimes good things fall apart so better things can fall together.
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=InMyDisk3yez Mar 17, 2008, 5:42:01 PM
well, thank you very much. i don't get many comments, so anything you say iz helpful. thank you.

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'george bush sayz we are lozing the war on drugz. you know what that impliez? there'z a war being fought, and people on drugz are winning it'. - bill hicks.
:weed::alien::alientwo::meditation::matrixfight::mib::ambulance::hug::alientwo::alien::weed:
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=InMyDisk3yez Mar 17, 2008, 5:42:28 PM
hearing iz one thing. reacting iz another.

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'george bush sayz we are lozing the war on drugz. you know what that impliez? there'z a war being fought, and people on drugz are winning it'. - bill hicks.
:weed::alien::alientwo::meditation::matrixfight::mib::ambulance::hug::alientwo::alien::weed:
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=InMyDisk3yez Mar 17, 2008, 5:43:01 PM
you hear well. thank you.

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'george bush sayz we are lozing the war on drugz. you know what that impliez? there'z a war being fought, and people on drugz are winning it'. - bill hicks.
:weed::alien::alientwo::meditation::matrixfight::mib::ambulance::hug::alientwo::alien::weed:
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