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part one: never

how close will we come
how far will we never go
pleaze, stay with me

how close will you come
this life, will we ever learn
how far have we come
this world, will it never end

some say...
some never know...
give me a chance to be
     the child i waz born to be
some will never know...
our dreamz are telling us...

give in to the last chance
tell me it will never end
tell me...

what are we here for
why are we still here
give the youth a magik card
tell them when the world will end
tell me...

part two: gift

consciousness,

   grant me the strength...

send us to another time, another place
make it seem real
take us to another show, a void in space
numb us, so we can pheel
blind us, so we can see

i'm so tired
everything iz old
   and ready for bed

show them you still care
tell them life can be fair
give them the gift...

it's over...
they're so sad...
musclez tired...
   and ready for bed
©2008-2009 =InMyDisk3yez
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Author's Comments

written just now. a little peace about the end of the world, and our children. loneliness.

disclaimer: if you don't like my spelling, then, pleaze, don't comment on it. thank you.

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:iconcaptainquirk:
I love this line:
give me a chance to be
the child i waz born to be

I also feel like there is so much pressure to "grow up" and get to some sort of destination in line, people don't stop to smell the proverbial roses.

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:iconelfmuse:
Love it :)
"it's over...
they're so sad...
musclez tired...
and ready for bed"
Brilliant work :)

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-I'm nothing more but a victim of society- "ElfMuse"
-War is not the answer,only love can conquer me- "A perfect Circle"

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:iconinmydisk3yez:
thank you so much!

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george bush sayz we are lozing the war on drugz. you know what that impliez? there'z a war being fought, and people on drugz are winning it'. - bill hicks.
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:iconinmydisk3yez:
thank you!

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george bush sayz we are lozing the war on drugz. you know what that impliez? there'z a war being fought, and people on drugz are winning it'. - bill hicks.
:weed::alien::alientwo::meditation::matrixfight::mib::ambulance::hug::alientwo::alien::weed:
:iconelfmuse:
no problem you're more then welcome :)

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-I'm nothing more but a victim of society- "ElfMuse"
-War is not the answer,only love can conquer me- "A perfect Circle"

Find me at *RawEm0tion
Be sure to check out ~LimeLightElf she's new but has a great gallery already.
Show her some love!
:iconlimelightelf:
Great work!!
It harbours many deep emotions.
And i can feel them touching my soul as i read:)
It's really very nice!

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:iconinmydisk3yez:
thank you so much, i'm glad you liked it!

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george bush sayz we are lozing the war on drugz. you know what that impliez? there'z a war being fought, and people on drugz are winning it'. - bill hicks.
:weed::alien::alientwo::meditation::matrixfight::mib::ambulance::hug::alientwo::alien::weed:
:icontrelore:
Very well done and the misspellings of some o the words seems deliberate and add more meaning to what your saying

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:iconinmydisk3yez:
thank you, that's what i'm going for.

--
george bush sayz we are lozing the war on drugz. you know what that impliez? there'z a war being fought, and people on drugz are winning it'. - bill hicks.
:weed::alien::alientwo::meditation::matrixfight::mib::ambulance::hug::alientwo::alien::weed:

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