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it seemz so much brighter inside
where the colourz sparkle out their name
and the air iz so fresh, crisp, and sweet
you'd swear the sky had been reborn
with so many starz shimmering with genious
the water iz so sparkling clear and smooth
az it tricklez slowly down the rocks
whispering it's secrets of 3ternity
this iz a place where all your dreamz
will freely and joyfully dance before you
where all your wonderz will come to meet you
and all your creaturez will come to greet you
and play in the fieldz of creativity
my little purple dragon sits pearched atop reality
az she whisperz a secret to me, that only we can know
and my blue moon sharez the sky with my golden son
i could sit here az a 6øÐ, for a thouzand yearz
and ponder a thought, or contemplate my next 3xistence
all life iz shining with perfection
az I sit here in my solitude
listening to the soundz of brilliance
i'm wandering thru my memoriez
az I travel thru infinity
staring at my shining sun
it's so much brighter when you step inside
so won't you pleaze come dream with me
©2008-2009 =InMyDisk3yez
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Author's Comments

this iz an old one, for the metamorphosis album. this poem waz written about a waterfall in oxbow park, in gresham, oregon, in 2000. i sat beside this waterfall, and listened to the sound it made, az it trickled down the rocks, and when i got home, i wrote this poem. enjoy.

disclaimer: if you don't like my spelling, then, pleaze, don't comment on it. thank you.

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:iconcaptainquirk:
It's radiant! Perfect timing too. I think the world needs some more happiness.

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:iconinmydisk3yez:
thank you! and thanks for the fav! i'm glad you liked it!

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:iconelfmuse:
Waaah great poem,I love every single part of it.
my favorite line must be "i'm wandering thru my memoriez
az I travel thru infinity"
:+fav:

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-War is not the answer,only love can conquer me- "A perfect Circle"

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:iconlimelightelf:
Wow!
It just sweeps me away to a far better place!
It's zen:)

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:iconinmydisk3yez:
thank you so much!

--
george bush sayz we are lozing the war on drugz. you know what that impliez? there'z a war being fought, and people on drugz are winning it'. - bill hicks.
:weed::alien::alientwo::meditation::matrixfight::mib::ambulance::hug::alientwo::alien::weed:
:iconinmydisk3yez:
thank you so much! i'm glad you liked it!

--
george bush sayz we are lozing the war on drugz. you know what that impliez? there'z a war being fought, and people on drugz are winning it'. - bill hicks.
:weed::alien::alientwo::meditation::matrixfight::mib::ambulance::hug::alientwo::alien::weed:
:iconelfmuse:
you are welcome :P

--
-I'm nothing more but a victim of society- "ElfMuse"
-War is not the answer,only love can conquer me- "A perfect Circle"

Find me at *RawEm0tion
Be sure to check out ~LimeLightElf she's new but has a great gallery already.
Show her some love!
:iconlimelightelf:
Your welcome:)
You make great work!

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  /l、
゙(゚、 。 7
 l、゙ ~ヽ
 じしf_, )ノ

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